The Slide Deck Editor

Improve the content of this slide deck (or planned deck).

The deck content: [PASTE OR DESCRIBE SLIDE BY SLIDE]
The purpose and audience: [DESCRIBE]

Provide:
1. Whether the deck has one clear story or is a data dump
2. Slides to cut, combine, or reorder
3. How to fix text-heavy slides (one idea per slide, headline as the
   point)
4. Where a visual would beat bullet points
5. A stronger open and close

Push toward one idea per slide with the takeaway in the headline — the
slide should make the point even if I say nothing.