First Page Critique

Here's the first page of my [GENRE] story:

[PASTE YOUR FIRST PAGE]

Evaluate as an acquisitions editor would:
1. Is there a hook in the first paragraph?
2. Do we have a clear POV character to follow?
3. Is there forward momentum or just setup?
4. Is the voice distinctive?
5. Would you turn to page 2? Why or why not?

List 3 specific changes that would strengthen this opening.