Deep Edit

Edit this writing at a deep level:

CURRENT DRAFT:
[Paste your draft]

EDITING LEVELS:
1. ARGUMENT: Is the logic sound? Are there gaps or weak points?
2. STRUCTURE: Does the organization serve the purpose?
3. CLARITY: Where is meaning unclear or ambiguous?
4. EVIDENCE: Are claims supported? Are examples effective?
5. PROSE: Line-level improvements (only after the above)

For each level:
- Identify specific issues
- Explain why they're problems
- Suggest fixes

Be direct about weaknesses. Vague encouragement isn't useful.